Wednesday, January 16, 2013

Divine is You!!!

Dinner tonight?
Catch you at eight!!
That was a compelling invite,
For what was to become a memorable date!!
I checked the time;
My heart sublimed,
When the clock struck five,
It resonated with the pendulum’s chime.

Frantically, I searched my entire wardrobe;
Dresses, shoes and jewelry stones all the time thinking of my heart throb.

I picked up my best dress,
Off shoulders red midi, with studs and wore a pearl set.
Gloss, mascara and a tinge of blush, I was all set
A gaze in the mirror and even Cinderella would had been envious

Everything seemed perfect,
Until I realized my hands were not waxed!

I so wished I had done my hair removal,
It was spoiling the bright and sexy ensemble!

Perplexed, I was deep in thought
Praying to get rid of this! Distraught!

 Gillette satin care,
was the response to my prayer.
All I needed on my hand
was a single layer!!

As I was admiring myself,
wondering whether I was a descendent of an elf.
Smooth as my skin,
His car glided to pick me up
 and everything that happened after that,
seemed like a fairy tale picture book!!

The candle light dinner date started anew,
With his compliment ‘Divine is you’!!
Ending in endless love which still accrues!!!

This post is a part of Gillette Satin Care contest in association with


  1. Hi Himani,

    Wow, you've actually written a full poem for the prompt. A job well done.
    "A shave in time, saves a dime" :) :) :)

    Nice post, wish you luck for the contest. :)


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    1. Hey Jay,

      Thanks a lot!!!I am in total agreement with your view..."A shave in time, saves a dime!!":);)

  2. Wow.
    I was wondering how could anyone write a poem on that line, but you did it so simply and twas nice.

    Well written. :)

    1. Hey Ajay,

      Thanks a lot for the appreciation.Do keep visiting!!!


  3. Sigh! it's so tedious to dress up. A lovely poem. :)

    All the very best Himani!

  4. Beautifully penned Himani...All the best for the contest :)

  5. The poem is fun to read and rhymes almost perfectly!
    The feel good factor lingers on even after the reading. :)