“Give me
the antiseptic bottle, quick”, yelled Nancy. “She must be in pain”, cried
Paarvi
Fast band-aid,
we don’t have any time to waste.
What
happened girls? Namita’s question left both of them startled.
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Ahh, Mom she
needs our help, our doll has just fallen from her bed!!
(This attempt is dedicated to all those
who loved to play those innocent games during childhood which definitely are
lost somewhere but are still fresh in our memories.)
End of the story is a good one. Keep up the good work.
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