Her phone buzzed, “Coffee at six.
Surprise for you”
She dressed elegantly for her first date. They were best friends
since childhood and today she will tell him what she feels.
Nervous but anxious, she rehearsed again.
Lost,she came back from her dreams with his voice, "Hey Meera, meet my love Anjali. Surprised!!!”
P.S- This is my first attempt on flash fiction in just 55 words. Hope you all like it. Suggestions invited.:)
nice work. Sour, it takes you off balance. Great.
ReplyDeletekeep writing.
Thanks Vikas....
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